powerful paragraph

Powerful  paragraph writing.Powerful paragraph writing  is when you writing a story about something or some where you has to describe what you are writing about and add some majestic words in your story.You can add similes and metaphor in you story.

A simile is comparison of one thing with another kind of thing like as soft as silk ans as fluffy as cotton candy.A metaphor is a word or phrase is applied  that is not literal or passable so like he was a shining star. 

For my powerful paragraph my class we had to look at a photo and writ and describe what we see and use metaphors and similes to what we think it feels like.here is the photo we had to do today.

                                         this is my powerful paragraph